Meadow

This was soooo sweet and gentle, you will probably never know how much I needed to be reminded of why I am here at this particular moment in time.

Turn to me my dear friend
Stretch your leaves so green
Your purest drops from heaven
Were obvious yet unseen
^^
Beautiful wording in this part, my fav. stanza:)

Good job, dear girl:)

5/5 Ingrid

Your poem is of deep harmony! Your words flow beautifully and with such grace they fly into you like a serene wind, oh my, what a piece!!!!! 5/5

What a lovely piece you have penned.

Play with the little birds
Singing their lullaby
Calm yourself beside me
And catch a butterfly

such soothing words. reads like a lullaby

Now, my dear meadow
You may rest for a while
But tomorrow is another day
For us to laugh and smile

I really liked your ending. promises of more happy days to come.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

I felt like i was swaying in the breeze as i read this. such a calming and descriptive piece! well done

MY....u have seriously impressed me, I did not expect to read sucha gift-ful piece to be honest but ur so talented...

u have the beauty of old poetry.. know wat i mean with that ?

i mean poetry that is soothing with its amazing images and deep expressions.. which u used in a high quality here.

Soar beyond dear meadow
Reach the clouds so bright
Leave a kiss to the sunset
And bring a glorious sight

>> this is so poetic..and words are
worded in a real harmony
i loved the joy i felt here..thnx :)

Play with the little birds
Singing their lullaby
Calm yourself beside me
And catch a butterfly
>> how joyful...soothing...comfy these
words make u feel...really this is kinda
relaxing..i just love it

Now, my dear meadow
You may rest for a while
But tomorrow is another day
For us to laugh and smile

>> yes so true..u ended it perfectly..

this poem deserves a deep and yet deeper comment..but i tried to be as brief as i can not to bore u ...yet couldnt just not comment with less sense..

thnx for sharing
ur gifted

5/5