Don't Leave me.

by WonderingSpiritDiaries   Dec 16, 2009


You have cured my broken heart
That is why You cannot part
You've been with me for a while now
And all of a sudden your leaving me..How?
I thought you promised you werent going to leave me
Now you decide to walk away from me
I grab your wrist and you say softly " Let me go"
Yet i pull you close to me and hug you saying "no"
A short last longing kiss on my lips and you depart
Taking half of my whole heart
Making me cry and scream at night
With almost everyone I fight
Because I cant seem to forget
That very first time we met...

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  • 13 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    Short but filled with emotion, i wanted to read more. Enjoyed reading what you had though. (: Keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Emily

    I love the end of this stanza. I think you are writing this really good so far. Just think of him and how it hurts and I'm sure more great stanzas and lines will come out, maybe a few tears too, but thats okay. Sometimes its okay to hurt, I'm sure it'll all be good for you soon. You seem like a really strong person, you can make it. I'm going through something similar. Keep up the good work, I'll be checking out your poems.
    <3,
    Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    Its very sad...
    but i rlly like it:]
    i can actually feel wat the girl in the poem is feeling....its rlly well written:]
    you're doing rlly good so far:)
    cant wait 'till u finish it(:
    5/5

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