All That Glitters (Diatelle)

by Lu   Jan 4, 2010


~*~*~*~*~ All That Glitters ~*~*~*~*~
-------------- (Isn't Always Gold) ---------------

.................................................................
............................ tears ............................
.......................... cascade ..........................
....................... fell betrayed .......................
.................... for lies were told ....................
............... beneath a masquerade ...............
........... every glitter shan't turn gold ...........
....... never a happy ending shall unfold .......
.... reality confirming all my darkest fears ....
....... heart forever to be frozen, so cold .......
........... love not to be taken and sold ...........
............... after all cards are played ..............
.................... all you don't hold ....................
....................... too shall fade .......................
......................... dark shade .........................
............................ nears .............................
...................................................................

R.T.V.W Club exercise

The Diatelle is a fun, syllable counting form like the etheree with a twist. The syllable structure of
the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme
pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks
best center aligned in a diamond shape.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    Now this one is awesome. Love the form shape. Your words bring so much emotion to the heart. How true "All that glitters Isn't always gold" I guess we learn so much no matter how old we are. Life teaches us so many lessons.
    ~clapping~
    *hugs
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    I love it!!! this is amazing really. I love the emotions, the rhyme, the wording..everything.

    ........... every glitter shan't turn gold ...........
    ....... never a happy ending shall unfold .......
    ^ those were my fave :)

    Very well done babe <3
    Write on~

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    This is wonderful Luanne.