Perfect Moment.

And it was then that the
lighthouse stood pensive-
as you gently kissed my lips;
hushing the night-
as the world hung with icicles-
envious of the passion we painted-
yearning for a perfect moment.

^^
Fav. stanza, but I loved the whole poem, it was very imaginitive and I could see all that you described. Excellent wording also.

Well done Tempsy:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

And it was then that the
lighthouse stood pensive-
as you gently kissed my lips;
hushing the night-

*This was my favorite part. The way you write is like a fairy tale. We all want to have that speical moment with thr people we love and this piece really captures that and makes it so clear. As always the imagery is very strong and beauitful and I thinky uo did a wonderful job using the pic. Would have been a hard one for me but you did an excellent job. I miss reading your work. Great job deary. Nik*

Temps
You did a awesome job with the image contest. Painting such a beautiful vision for the reader with your words. I just wanted to get lost in the vision :)
Love Cindy

Well done with the image. I had never thought of a lighthouse being pensive but I think it is. (smiles) Your images paint the perfect moment. Good Job.