Carry Me Away [Haiku]

by Kuro   Apr 6, 2010


Carry me away
warm summer wind to a place
of tranquility

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a nice feeling I got from reading this short little gem. Haiku though one of the shortest forms, is also difficult to make profound or memorable because you only have 3 lines to work with. You did a nice job with the picture painting imagery and the feeling the piece gives you.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A nice Haiku which welcomes the summer...
    your words paint a vivid picture..good write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Good poem Benny :] I want to be carried away too. I liked this piece, made me feel hopeful. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    What a lovely thought, to be carried away by a summer wind. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautiful, & makes the reader long for that tranquility as well. Very nice.