A Deadly Mirror

by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy   Apr 10, 2010


I stared upon a deadly mirror,
as I chant these very words:

"Who are you?who is thy?why are
you here?and why did you die?"

as my mother told me that
story one day, I got scared and
hid away.

I went upon that same
deadly mirror as I said those same
fateful words.the next thing i saw
was a man approaching me with the
knife from his soul. I ran, I ran
into the fog,the next thing I knew was
that my eyes had turned...to dust...

by:Shisana Jimenez & Yasadie Rosario

(to the people that understand this. this is a made up horror sort of poem I don't know what we were thinking while we wrote this, but it doesn't have to make sense most of the time....right?)

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  • 13 years ago

    by ninjamonkey

    I really like this one it reminds me of the movie mirrors

  • 13 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    Sounds finished to me. its a really good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Sorry lol kkind of flowing with events like tails..
    5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    May i suggest ?
    1st this became my fav now..so plz seperate the stanza or the couple of lines that are holding one msg or one meaning..

    cause this was ddeep..clear..and kind of

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    The next thing i KNEW, not new.

    I really liked this because it was like a story! and i think you should definitely finish writing it so i can read it again :D the suspense is killing me! So what happens to the girl?! haha

    "who are you?who is thy?why are
    you here?and why did you die?"
    - loved this!

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