I HAVE THE WORLD BY ITS THROAT.

Definitely hit hard, I love the words you chose to express your feelings. Powerful write.
Take care

Cool. Don't let it go. It might try to breathe.

Hi.

i have been through your poems. You write beautiful. i like your word choice but somehow i sense that every time you write, you are so full of rage. well i think emotion is the 2nd name of poetry and you can't negate your emotion. but don't let anger rule you, when you are write.

Very interesting short but sweet but delivers a powerful message

This is very powerful.
I really like how you used only 1 or 2 words until the end. I think that emphasized the meaning of each word. I also like how you put the whole thing in caps because i believe that also emphasized the power in each word.
Something I had a hard time with was getting a picture in my head. However, I havent written any of these poems so maybe thats why, I'm just used to more detail.