by Indian Comma Bean May 7, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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A minute's breath, stepping |
by Cindy
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This is such a beautiful piece you have penned. |
by Meena Krish
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You have painted vivid images with your words. Liked the read and the smooth flow..congrats on the win! |
by Rachel RTVW
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Beautifully penned. You could have removed some of the unnecessary filler words (and,I) but the piece flowed so well I almost didn't notice.. |