These People are Me

by A Phoenyx in Flight   May 17, 2010


The outcast who gets everything wrong.
The screw up who messes everything up.
The reject who hurts everyone loved.

The ugly person who accepts the fate.
The talker who never says anything right.
The happy one who is secretly depressed.

The hyper one who is plagued by nightmares nightly.
The brave one who is secretly screaming for help.
The scared one who has finally found love.

These people all have one thing in common.
You'd never believe even if you saw with your own eyes
But these people are me.

*THIS POEM IS COPY-RIGHTED*

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  • 7 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "The hyper one who is plagued by
    nightmares nightly."
    I think it will be better if you changed 'nightly' to every night. It'll flow better..

    But other than that, great word choice :)

    "The happy one who is secretly depressed."
    And
    "The brave one who is secretly screaming for
    help."
    Are my favorite lines. Very relatable.

    Really enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing :) 5/5

    -X

  • 7 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Hehe this poem wasnt meant to rhyme. mostof my poems dont

  • 7 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    This was pretty deep, didn't rhyme very well though