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by A Phoenyx in Flight May 17, 2010
Sadness, depression /
The outcast who gets everything wrong.
The screw up who messes everything up.
The reject who hurts everyone loved.
The ugly person who accepts the fate.
The talker who never says anything right.
The happy one who is secretly depressed.
The hyper one who is plagued by nightmares nightly.
The brave one who is secretly screaming for help.
The scared one who has finally found love.
These people all have one thing in common.
You'd never believe even if you saw with your own eyes
But these people are me.
*THIS POEM IS COPY-RIGHTED*
"The hyper one who is plagued by
I think it will be better if you changed 'nightly' to every night. It'll flow better..
But other than that, great word choice :)
"The happy one who is secretly depressed."
"The brave one who is secretly screaming for
Are my favorite lines. Very relatable.
Really enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing :) 5/5
by A Phoenyx in Flight
Hehe this poem wasnt meant to rhyme. mostof my poems dont
This was pretty deep, didn't rhyme very well though