Depressed Thoughts

by A Real Poet   Jul 15, 2010


Livin with an upset can get u close to death
the pain builds to a point cant relieve no stress
You become stuck in your mind
Trapped as u become lost n blind
Darkness overcomes your spirit
The bright light near the right side inside
Cant seem to hear it
You try to call out reaching ur hand for feelin
But how hard is it when u realize the help u seek is ruin
The mind starts to wonder
Your soul starts to blunder
Happiness for your heart hungers

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