Random thoughts

by A Real Poet   Jul 15, 2010


All the lies makes my eyes blind to reality I try hard to see through the dark but the lies destroyed my sight all i see are faded marks into insanity
Depression leads to suicide
Now suicide is on my mind
I try so hard to improvise
But i fall back down to become paralyzed
I've been brought down so many time by many women
Now i chose to stay down and stay hidden
Cuz my mind my soul my body has put my heart for forbidden
My heart is swollen n my mind is broken
My mind is hopin to find a heart thats workin

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I can relate tot his one. I feel that way when things get too much for me to handle. I liked the way it flows from line to line. A very emotional and powerful piece. Great work again. Nik

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