Death

by A Real Poet   Jul 15, 2010


I believe death is a blessin.
Why we fear it?
No more drama with the messin
Understand these lyrics?
Picture a life with no worries
The life you pictured is your casket gettin burried.
Imagin a world with no violence
R.I.P means complete silence

(It'll be nice if u leave a comment and let me know what u truely think about the poems. I like poetry because it helps me and ill like to know how to make my poems better so I can better explain my emotions and the poem itself can have a better chance to relate to the readers. So please tell me what u think. It can help. Thank you)

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  • 13 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    Although I wanted to read more I agree with Nik on this, It was short but simply to the point. Great job. 5/5 :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I liked that it was simple and to the point. I think your ideas are easy to understand and relate to and that's always nice. Great work. Nik