Give Up

Great peom , emotional & meaningful ...
Congratulations on your win , you really worth it .
wonderful job 5/5

I liked the poem for the simplicity but was still searching for more. A good poem but not all that excellent to me, I believe I've seen something a lot better from you; maybe you're just experimenting with a new style but I was expecting some more with some metaphors or stronger language in it. Don't want to seem like the negative comment on here, I like your poem and the way it flowed so smoothly, I just wish I could have read something more intriguing. Just my thoughts of course.

Love doesn't give up on anyone my dear,love this write :'D

Simple.. but full of feelings.. few words but had expressed everything ^_^

Great write it looks like you been writing poems for some time now and they are quite profound. Honestly, you don't need another pat on the back from me; I take it you already know how good you really are. ;)