You and Me(Diamante)

by Chelsey   Aug 24, 2010


You
Inspirational, warm
Distracting, charming, loving
Fighter, endurer, helpful, honest
Uplifting, encouraging, believing
Happy, admired
Me

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very positive!
    I love the happy mood I was able to feel while reading this sweet piece.
    I love the way you penned his personality down ..and how you described yours..

    sounded for me..nothing less than perfect.
    a tender writing
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Check your parts of speech, "admired" is a Verb, "ing" words I believe Gerunds, "you, me" pronouns. Other wise well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Angie

    Wonderful... keep trying out new styles, you're pretty good with them so far, ;)

    I like this one, its short, sweet and touching

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Only the subjects are the opposite, the words don't have to be drr :)

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    So i am guesssing this is about your boyfriend ? haha at least that is what i gathered from reading your last piece. This was a sweet write :D good work !!!

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