Rania in these few years I have known you
I have watched as you have grown & flowered into the most amazing Poet. your choice of words are so eloquently spoken & expressed , your english is becoming so fluent & your choice of expression is something I would be so proud to have accomplished myself . There are so many treasures that await within you for all to see .
You are a Diamond who continues to shine brighter with each new expression you release ....From what I see here you have taken a hint of pain & allowed it to flourish in the the perfect expression of beauty 5/5 my sweet friend .... All my love , Uncle Jim
Sun set - sun rise. How beautiful the scene that we have all gazed upon. It is a true picture of wealth, the richness of its tapestry, the brightness of its warming colours, shining bright, glowing like magical fires warming a world below that is servant to its warmth and its light.
I enjoyed this poem very much. Imagine if you could harness this miraculous sun, its very essence in one cup. How precious would that cup would be? How carefully would you carry that cup? Surely not one single drop you would want to spill. What would be the consequences of such an act?? A sun that glowed less brightly, a warmth that had a chilled edge? Imagine that??
I love love love this title, I was going to try it as well, but no spot left & I probably wouldn't have had time to write it anyways. I thought you did such an excellent job though, one of the best poems you've written to date.
Wow.... This poem is absolutely magnificent! It's no wonder you won! Congratulations by the way! I absolutely love this poem. It's amazing!!! I would love to hear about the inspiration about it... Do PM me!!! Excellent job!