Midnight Madness Part 8: "A Difficult Conundrum"

by Ronald Edwards   Sep 3, 2010


You dont know who youre talking to
echoed off the walls.
I lunged full force, knocking him down
between the parking stalls.

My switchblade snapped wide open
at his throat I held it tight.
My reaction took him by surprise,
he wasnt ready for a fight.

I whispered oh just loud enough
only for him to hear.
I had his full attention
as I spoke into his ear.

Listen hard and listen good,
to what you have to do.
If you dont youll make the menu
of the local zoo.

Ill cut you up and feed you
to my tiger friends.
What they dont eat will find its way
in mix to feed the hens.

Midnight didnt move an inch
but stared into my eyes.
He knew I meant what I just said
arguing would be unwise.

Get it straight, and do it quick.
Dont play me like Im dumb.
If you dont youll find yourself
in a difficult conundrum.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    ..new events...how nice
    u really got powerful wording and
    u got news ideas for each part
    scary person lol

    umm Listen hard and listen good,
    to what you have to do.
    If you dont youll make the menu
    of the local zoo.
    >>loved the events as a story but
    i wish u can change the flow a bit
    was offf..

    Midnight didnt move an inch
    but stared into my eyes.
    He knew I meant what I just said
    arguing would be unwise.
    >>i so loved this one.flowed the best
    a gr8 stanza and my fav

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Great flow to your poem, in fact ive read a few of your poems now and your structures are great and always a wonderful chilling read :)

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