It makes me want to listen to the actual song. but this seemed very sad and bit jelous. interesting write.

~Kuro

:) yap i agree sad writing..i love this title song..so catchy and then the emotions through ur words flew so well..

5/5

This wass completely amazing..
you are an amazing poet, and i bet you won those contest also..5/5

You have improved so much dear Nik :)

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Your writing skills has matured, your writing style is now appealing and more professionally picked.

Keep up the good work!

This was amazing, something I had to read twice. it makes me want to start writing again. Great job really great.

Excellent job there girl :-) Great wording, emotions running hot and high. good luck

This poem made me feel it was based on a real romance and I would not change any part of it