HI Kellyanna

Oh to be back in my mothers arms .... :-)

Nice write, thanks for sharing

Great poem. Gave a great idea of what it would be like for a baby as soon as he/she is born. You were quit vivid at times and you did an overall great job on this poem. Good job and keep writing.

A baby's point of view of the world..the child
has so much to learn before he/she can face
life..I liked this read :)

Very Nicely Penned Kelleyanna. How are you? Missed you very much. All my Love!!!

Kelleyana,

It was really touching you wrote this from the babie's point of view:)

Indeed it is so difficult for them to be thrown into this cold world and being inside the womb is paradise, both for the mum and the child:) I loved my time with my child...life never was the same after that!

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

This is a very thought provoking theme blending beautifully with the rhyme and rhyme of observations and questions

Kelleyana

This is beautifully done and because it's done from the babies point of view it's very unique. I believe babies are blank canvasses' and we need to help them paint to help them thrive ie. give them the nurturing they need.

I feel in 'life has teaches me it's lessons with joy and contentment' that the teaches should be 'life has taught me' or 'life does teach me.' Also Brest should be breast.

Take care, Em