Optimism Over Lurks Your Pessemistic Thoughts.

by Jess   Oct 29, 2010


Underestimate Me?

Optimism Overlurks Your Pessemistic Thoughts.

Stronger Than Ever.

The Weather Was Quite Severe;

Although the Rainbow did Come.

Forever Is A Long Time,

Happiness Till the End.

No Time For Pretend.

Waiting for A Sign,

For A Picture In The Mind.

A Song That Has A Meaning.

A Broken Heart that Is Bleeding.

Where In The world, Is the Faith?

Are Troubles Found By All?

Are Hardship's hidden By Simple Smile's?

The World Is Crying;

Nobody Know's the Dreams That Linger.

Maybe This Is Hell, And Heaven Await's.

What If There Is No Earth?

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    So many questions and i have no answers. v.v

  • 13 years ago

    by Delirium

    I really like this poem. I like the concept and the title. Very nice :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I think I know what you meant by over lurks but as Britt said it is not a word, but you can just separate the 2words and it would be just fine.

    Now let me not repeat the suggestions, she already gave. Tho I recommend and prefer un-capitalized form as well..

    SO about the poem, REALLy it is full of passion..u had something very strong between your word choice and the usage of words.. Some lines sounded off topic but MAN some just chilled me...it had this sad atmosphere yet a challenging one.

    Few changes and this would be really gd. If u are interested I can pm u which lines sounded off topic///cause other than that..I think it is really a gd piece ..

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Great job =D i loved it girly =)
    keep writin

    --Hannah =D

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