My Life

I can feel this poem i know how you feel :) 5/5

Good way to express your feeling's i feel alone in life

Love it;)
you just express all your feelings and you did it very well yes we live once and we are the only one who choose how to live it and wich way we want to take
well done

Loved your choice of words, especially in the last stanza, really woke my creative soul. To be honest when i first started to read this poem i thought it could probably be used as a song, had that kind of singing rhyme. I deffinatly agree with Beautiful Chaos, this can be taken so many ways, gets you to contemplate every angle, a really good write, good for you. IBE

I think people could look at this from many different angles and apply it to their life. I was not fond of the last line of the first stanza, I think it was the repeat of "way" but a very powerful write. Good work.