"Because," said Reality calmly...
Karma.

"Because," said Reality, calmly...
"Karma."

This is a well-presented
and truly thought-provoking
piece.....good show..

I never..ever comment any poem with few words..
like never..It is not ME..

but allow me to say nothing more than :

fabulous !

I have no idea why i was so influenced by this poem..it is amazing for the deepness of it's concept.
i have read better poems, regarding the poems that are nominated for this week..but non gave me these thoughts -yet.
That this poem has given me.!

amazingly profound!

5/5 and i have nothing to pick out..even ig u got a gram mistake..i am not sure I was able to nice it..
I will pm u about that tho.

well done

//We are blind and methodical.
We are fleeting and biased
And entitled and arbitrary.
// that is so true ...
truth and honesty and other virtues are disappearing so fast that I wonder if in coming years these will simply become words and nothing else
well penned.

A philosophical write, I liked it very much..so much to ponder upon and you are very right in your perception of reality, apart from God pulling our strings, I think we design our own fate to a very great extent and are responsible for our own life.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

A very insightful read and so very true! You
have given each of them life and portrayed their true character...well done & congrats on the win!!

Congratulations on being a winner this week!
keep up the good work!

[not bad for a first time posting, huh?]

A great poem and truly deserving of the Win you got. I was impressed by the simplicity of this poem and yet the rich meaning behind it if one thinks about what you are truly trying to say. Great job and keep writing.

Congrats on your front page win.

Gives the reader much to think about.
Well done, congrats again

I absolutely love it, a different style than what I am used to seeing and you definitely deserved the win:)

great read

jessie:)

What an inspiring poem. You portrayed them with great emotional thoughts!