Kiss ( haiku)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Nov 9, 2010


Ripples in a stream
created by the subtle
kiss of dragon-flies

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That turned out amazingly for a Haiku. I think most Haiku writers would hate you right about now. Haha.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Most excellent my friend.

    One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is what Haiku is all about...in a few words images come alive...well written!