by morgan Jan 27, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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You held my hand |
by Faith Ann
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...yeah i can relate to tht. good job! |
by S. Van Dyke
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I really liked this, you can see the raw emotion behind it. I loved the question at the end, pulls it together nicely. This would make a really good song; just something to think about. Keep writing you have a lot of talent. 5/5. |