Rage Fuels the Fire

Damn, I can't vote because it is older lol.

This is one of my fave's. It has the flow so fast that you can easily just keep reading it again and again. I loved the words Blindly deafening together, what a strong impact that has when reading. I also liked your choice to repeat the first stanza as your last. some people don't like repitition in poems but for me it is my favourite when it works well. And you make it work well.

Excellent poem.

I have poems like this amazing job I loved it and greatly worded emotions overflow wow a wonderful poem :) 10/10
U are now one of my favorites :)

Liz, you did really well with this poem. I loved
'My mind is a weapon
My body is a killer'

Soo true and yet it has so many meanings. Many people will be able to relate to this. Great job. 5/5

Svandyke

I loved this poem it was really strong and you allowed the reader to feel the emotions of the writer

5/5