Someone a little missed this day (Loop poem)

by A lonely soul   Feb 15, 2011

This day we miss someone
Someone who is wonderful
Wonderful with an enchanting smile
Smile that tickles the heart and lifts a soul

A soul that has innocence
Innocence that is sublime and graceful
Graceful, bewitching and touching
Touching beyond an artists imagination

Imagination that has a little sadness
Sadness that can be overcome and shared
Shared with people who care
Care enough for someone's bliss

Bliss that is needed this day and every day
Every day that is today and tomorrow
Tomorrow that we have to make better
Better now than later or never

Never say never again..... (Justin Bieber lyrics)
Again and again one should dream
Dream of touching the stars way above the clouds
Clouds that only fog the vision

Vision one must have to see through and beyond
Beyond that the mortal eye can see in the pitch of darkness
Darkness that will not stand in the way of imagination

Imagination is light to a soul that wants to see
See a dream brightly lit up in the sky
Sky has a path for those who wish to reach for the stars
Stars are in those of us who dream with courage
Courage and lots of happiness, we wish someone this special day

Annotation: A little poetic tribute written with special warmth to give inspiration, vision and courage to someone, on this special day 2-14-11, in lieu of white roses, not to compete with the ubiquitous red roses this day. The last word or two to create a rhyme effect in each line is a style of poetry, new to me, that I decided to experiment with, seems simple and expressive for this day.

This is a loop poem - refer to an explanation provided on another similar poem on my list.


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  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I think the style of this piece is terrific, and was executed well. The emotion and tone were so clear and present, but they were not weak as most seem to do; they were bold yet they did not over power the piece. The flow is amazing, it really worked along with the style. The creativity in this piece was so well thought of, and it really kept me interested in the piece. Overall I believe you have penned a successful, magnificent piece.