As the noose tightens

by Kuro   Mar 28, 2011


I take a moment
to look back and think
where i went wrong
where's the missing link

as the noose tightens
you remind me
i wasn't enough
its harder to breathe

i'm tired of fighting
this noose around my neck
i don't deserve to breathe
don't wanna fix the wreck

close your eyes
it will be over soon
time to sing
my one note tune

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  • 12 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Not sure about the ending - maybe its just something im not understanding but i liked the rest of the poem. You have written it morbidly great. :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Benny :[ such sad pieces my friend. Do I need to come up there and give you some skittles and a hug. I hope everything is okay with you. Cheer up. -Nik

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