Alice In Nightmareland

by Mello193   Apr 6, 2011


Vorpal in hand
ready to fight
sanitarium
ender tonight
hatter goes and chokes
on tea he burnt
march of hares
bloody lessons learnt
my mind bleeds
like the stain of a knife
remember whens
a girl
a life
broken free
no one sees
bunny and i both agree
queen of heart
master of hell
lewis carroll
got nothing on the stories i tell
madness returns
in quiet life
some say crazy
well see if they still think so
vorpal knife
jabberwocky
isnt a real word
then again
neither is nord
maybe it is
remember
crazy
remember
fire

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My gosh this piece is creative. So descriptive and my gosh its captivating. I mean its creepy as hell, but it is penned magnificently well. The word choice here is so strong and the mood set up a really interesting tone.

    MRK

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I definitely was astounding by the creativity of this. Excellent way to embrace the chaos and confusion that is Alice in Wonderland in a dark way. Beautifully done! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This was a very interesting piece. I liked how you put a different view on Alice in ~Wonderland~ to Alice in Nightmareland. Clever of you. Your style is very free. You really put what you think and feel down. Each word carries power.

    5/5

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