by climber guy          Apr 16, 2011
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            new love
            
    
| 
            We sit making small talk  | 
by christopher
| Climber guy this is so unconventional poetry. i think with some proper english lessons and some tuition on poetry workshops you would have a wonderful gift. | 
| Cool! The last four lines really blend well and wrap it up nicely! good job |