My DayDream...

by Sierra Rae   Jun 20, 2004


*I'm embarrassed!! I usually write for myself not for other people to read!! but here ya go anyways...it's really corny and you can't make fun of me for any of it!!! lol-enjoy!!*

I wish it was you
here next to me
instead of my brother
annoying me

I stare off into space
imagining the day
we went to the movies
and out to play

white chicks
is what we saw
but I have to say
I don't remember it at all

we met outside
it was all a blur
one big hug
nothing would stir

walked into the mall
hand in hand
as my friends asked about
“my new man”

twenty-one questions
that I didn't hear
twenty-one answers
that my mind didn't steer

into all the stores
us tagging along
as my friends ran around
singing some song

ate in the food court
talking and staring
just plain having fun
acting crazy and daring

went over to the theater
our seats towards the back
my friends are so loud!
showing off, talking smack
we talked and sat close
laughed with them all
then the movie got over
and I was trying to stall

wasn't ready to leave
but it had to be done
so we headed towards my car
there's the end of my fun!

so we said our goodbyes
another huge hug
we couldn't separate
my friends literally had to tug

then one final goodbye
as we pulled in close
and you kissed me right there
I was smiling my most

dazed all the way home
and into my room
missing you already
then I heard a big boom

oh no! it's my brother
running into my door
this was all a daydream
I hear him stomping on the floor

well goodbye for now
until that day
when I get to see you
and go out and play!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    sierra, u have no reason to be embarrassed....that was really really good..i could picture every word of it....great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    aww..tht was a super poem..i loved it..;_)

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Ohhh, hey that's a sweet poem :D you should be proud of it ;) and yeah, day dreams are great aren't they?? ;)

  • Hey its not corny... Its so cuuuiiitttte! Cute....i can see you blushing while writting this poem... Sweet dream... I would love to see such dreams again and again....
    :) Trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    That isnt corny at all! That was great! lol, its how I think sometimes too. You write well, so dont think you suck or your corny because you arent! You are a good writer. Thanks by the way for the comment on my poem, much appreciated.