Untrust You

Untrust,
this simple word alone is a powerful choice of a word,
a decision to untrust someone, and just like it is a process to trust someone i think it can be a process to untrust someone, to remind you that you now have to put up those walls before you so easily slide back into the way it was,
had a nice pattern.
i like that the last line is so final, i imagine a strong woman saying this.

Failed attempts to try,
questionable effort,
misinterpretations
take the best of us.
--this was my fav. part, not sure if i have a reason, i just liked it :]

What can I say .. Exactly what I like to read in a poem.

Concise, direct, straight to the point .. The meaning behind this poem is really powerful, the decision to untrust someone is a really hard thing to do, because once the circle of trust is broken, its really fdifficult to find it again ..

Great ending as well .. No doubt its a 5/5

This is nominated!

Wow! Pretty much every line in this was powered with emotion! It was very moving and poetic and genius actually! I am glad you were inspired once again! Loved it. :-)