Vampire's Romance: Good Bite, Last Night

by Jack Nightengale   May 17, 2011


Tempted to drink her body dry,
A single tear rolled from my eye.
Let her turn into a vampire like me,
Bring her into a new world for her eyes to see.

Her body grows cold as the change begin,
The heart beat slowly fades from within.
It's almost too late as the Sun starts to rise,
she awakes with a look of surprise.

I kiss her lips and whisper in her ear,
How do you feel my dear.
I wish we had more time because this feels right,
As the Sun shines she say, It was a Good Bite for our Last Night!

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  • 12 years ago

    by TheEnchanted

    I think i'm in love with this well written poem, it's Amazing how it sounds like a piece from a Vampire book. Keep doing the Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I adore this poem, the story is really well writen and I really like the choice of words, keep it up :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    How do you do it?! how do you manage to write such amazing pieces that never fail to leave me stunned!! I read this poem like five times because its so good!! I truly believe you're one of the most talented poets on this site!! the imagery you use in your words is so vivid and real, its like an art work with the most intricate details. yet again, another truly amazing piece!! really wish I could give you a vote of more than just a five because you deserve it!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I nreally loved the first part, And this second one is even better .. I loved the story sooooo much :)

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