Innocence.

Awww such a sad poem yet still a good read

5/5

I liked this one very much, and it really conveys a great deal of emotions. I especially liked the first stanza, and how it flows.

I'll mirror what others have said - I would refrain from capatlizing every first letter. Also, you misspelled "believing" in the first stanza.

Keep writing!

Brilliant..so much has already been said..this is by far my best of ur poems..great work jessi

"Wont" should be "Won't" with an apostroph! :)

a beautiful piece that says so much :) keep writing.

I like how you spelled out the story but also kept something from it, then lead us to the end with the ultimate reveal.

I have to say aesthetically, I would not capitalize every letter. It gave an "amateur" feel and it's not grammatically correct :) Make look a little easier on the eye to your readers as well :)

"She Hold's On Tight. "

Hold's should be holds.. it doesn't need the apostrophe :)

Overall this is a very good poem with a lot of emotion and feeling. Something that is definitely easily related to for any age, we've all been there whether we're teenagers or old maids! Lol. Beautifully done.