Imaginary

by Renegade Angel   May 25, 2011


Dream as if you can fly, and deceive all,
Let the night fall into comfort and more.
Go ahead and let your senses free fall

Though it all may seem daunt, let it carry, fall.
Let the placid waves rock you shore to shore.
Dream as if you can fly, and deceive all.

Dream a thousand dreams, and let them outfall.
Crystal caverns wait to be danced galore.
Go ahead and let your senses free fall.

Fields of wildflowers wait for us to call,
Letting the music run your soul to snore.
Dream as if you can fly, and deceive all.

Go ahead, and venture out till nightfall.
Don’t let anyone reason you to bore.
Go ahead, and let your senses free fall.

Thrill ride your dreams till you cannot at all.
The world awaits for you to fly and soar.
Dream as if you can fly, and deceive all.
Go ahead, and let your senses free fall.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Your use of the rhyme scheme, ABA throughout is a nice touch, as is the 10 syllables per line. To finish this piece with an extra 'A' rhyme was fitting to this thought-out form.
    We can be the master of our dreams, exploring wonderous world's of reality. Escaping the reality of life is understandable, especially at the moment, so although written some years back it still holds true today.

    Nice work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was really neat. Definitely got the imagination rolling. When I was reading this I could picture the night. Then "trying to fly through it but your senses fall" was really neat. Cause that's how it happens. Then I love the imagery of the ocean. Oceans are so vast and deep. And comparing them to rocking the person to sleep was really cool. All in all great job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I really enjoyed reading this. I love the repeating lines, and imagery of this poem.
    5/5 Keep writing :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is amazing!! i love it alot!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A beautiful poem....
    I would like it if u read mine as well

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