Delta

This poem was very calming and yet I couldn't help but feel sorrow and frustration. I admired the nature tones within and the visual display of a woman sitting near a pond of koi fish was very soothing. I adore poems with a deep passion intertwined. I also felt like the woman is trying to take on the weight of the world and needing to take a break from the struggles. The creative look of this piece is what hooked me along with the many paths I took while reading this piece... Very nice!!

Incredible poem Karla!

Seriously an incredible one... I always like to read poems which have so much to offer through their words and this one's did it likewise.... :)

Reading your poetry, you make me see the world through your eyes; how you see it. And it's beautiful..

Hey, Karla. Your title brilliantly matches your content. I won't lie and say, I grasp the meaning... But I think you have related the paths of life to one end through a delta... I don't know, but the overall impression this gave me was Fascinating.

:)