Benevolence

'Raw truths, painful realizations, self reflections, unsheathed disbelief, standing in a pool of dirty souls
numb from the pressure of existing.'

Holy... Whoa. Your writing amazes me. You put me in a place and whirl my mind, I never knew... Wow.

That stanza is great! It speaks to me as I feel this was written for me. :0

'These walls haven't stood the test of time
built in an eager time of defense,'
^^^
That's my favorite line. Something similar to that is tattooed on my back.

Very intersting poem reminds me of a drk love poem

isnt lady antabellum metal

Very good great flow and straight from the heart 5/5

I'm very new to writing but I have to say that your work is amazing! I really love the flow, this one hit me deep . Thankyou :-)

I love everything about this creation!
But the final verse describes the door of the heart suddenly opening (again), to allow love to be acknowledged and accepted.
Really warming to my heart! Thanks for the sharing. Ray