A Pain Plunged In My Chest

I think this is a well written poem because the emotions are strong and I like the way you worded this. I have to admit that the flow isn't that continuous, but it doesn't effect the poem too much. I think that the feelings and the story you're telling is really relateable.

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I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you

I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you

I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you