My Head Or My Heart

by Joseph Boadi   Feb 15, 2018

Addled I stare with squinted thought
As my heart and my steel head wrought
Once again my tale of love proceeds
My heart craves, as my adamant head recedes
Below my chest a happy glide
Whiles my head forms thunder-clouds on every side
My heart advices “ race across the sky and dash”
Yet logic insists if I do I’ll crash
Love love love Who do I trust
My head or heart in a dilemma am completely thrust


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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I honestly didn't like how it ended, because it was so interesting until the ending line. It is only a personal opinion, hehe. The poem is greatly rhymed and you have expressed your dilemma in a lovely poetic way.

    • 6 years ago

      by Joseph Boadi

      Sorry about that. Lolz Thank you by the way
      Am happy you enjoyed this piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done, quite the dilemma to be in. I think we start with our heart and our heads catch up.

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