You and The Moon

by rachael   Aug 3, 2011


Hang the moon for me, my Love
Set it high in the starry sky
But leave it loose, off kilter, askew
I like to look upon the dark side too
For even moons are flawed, as such
And here confess my secret pleasure,
For if the moon, in all its nightly glory,
Bears, too, the burden we humans share
I am thus convinced that even we
Can rise, as she, to light the world

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  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Beautiful <3

  • 14 years ago

    by v

    I believe the moon is perfect, but I still love your analogy. Well written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    Well written, short and beautiful, description was great.... good job

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is magnificent! You have done a fabulous job with the imagery and the scene. Oh let me just put it this way, Wonderful!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

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