Don't Pull Away

This poem is all so true :)

Don't pull away -
hang on to me instead.
I have a strong grip
and will carry you to bliss.

-I love this part(:.
Wanting him to hold on you instead of pulling away so that you guys can last it together.

Emotion poured out, you could feel what you wrote.
Love it :)
5/5

Don't -
lie to yourself and
pretend like you're happy,
when you're hurting inside.

^^

if only they would be courageous enough to show themselves..

I feel a person who dares show their weaknesses is the strongest kind.

This poem is one I can relate to very well. It might surprise you that some things never change, no matter how old you are, the same kind of situations keep on repeating themselves between men and women..maybe we come from different planets after all!..;0)

5/5 Ingrid

Great!

No matter what you write their is a softness to it, I see you as a gentle soul from just your words.
Excellent write as always
Connie

Don't
Ever stop writing sara, you're very skilled. Such a joy to read.