Fears of Loving You

by Sunshine   Aug 6, 2011


Be you a world I fear to be a part of
or a romantic song I am afraid to love
perhaps a beauty I refuse to believe in
for the comfort I feel, I count as a sin

But...

my heart beats like a chorus of drums
that cradle the softest sighs by your hums
to charm my feelings with a symphony
that brings out all the romance within me.

by: Rania Moallem

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Title suggestions would be appreciated,
this is about the fear of being in love
with someone who is obviously moving your
feelings.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Fears of being in love can also be a fear of looseing ur self in the process. this poem is really great :) and the title is perfecto :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by RSJ

    The reason I'm in love with your poetry is because I Can wholeheartedly relate to it most of the time
    You have written and pinned down the way I exactly feel
    And once again, you've captured my mind n soul while doing it 5 no doubt.

  • 14 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Nana :)))))

    my love!

    this was awesome...:)
    I agree with Temps that you always write the same feelings but I should add that you can nail it in different ways! that are always new and refreshing :)

    I would put this in the sad section I guess :P
    now, you want suggestions for the title..ughhh
    though I suck at titles but I'm going to give you few suggestions (that you will pass them by for sure:P)

    on the way of my journey
    upon a rose petal! LOL

    ok, no seriously, I would suggest these: :)

    -fearing my own happiness.

    -about love and fear

    I know they are bad but ughh I'm clueless :)
    five ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    That is so sweet. It seems you write with the same feelings I feel all the time haha. Really your title may be okay the way it is however I would make it 'Fears of Loving You' - inserting of makes it sound much better. So sentimental. Lovely piece :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Meme

    Sweeeeeeeet .. Awwwww how cute :)
    Your words sing to my soul, love it <3

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