Torn Between Two

by Innocent Fairy   Aug 11, 2011


I'm torn between two,
I don't know what happened,
To make this world so blue.

But i don't know which to choose.
I like them both,
and both, i don't want to loose.

I'm torn between two,

Twisting and pulling
resisting every move
I'm torn between two.

My firey passion burns
Yearning to talk
and learn.

Like infatuation,
I crave them

But still torn between two,

I dream of both...
Just itching to know,
What they think of me.
And hopefully one day,
I will see.

But I'm Still Torn Between Two.

:) I did this with the help of my new friend Jacob Queen. without him this would never be a masterpiece :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by anjielblue

    Great poem, ^_^'

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    The title is a real eye-catcher in my opinion. I was also pulled in my the first few verses already and I liked the rhymes. I think that because of you repeating the line "I'm torn between two" this piece had a really good flow. I like the emotions and the structure is good aswell. Overall this is a very well penned piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    Very good job :) I know when a poem is of good quality when I can feel it. & I felt this one.

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVeIdIoT

    :)wow its like u wrote my love life in middle skool, LoVeIt!(:

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVeIdIoT

    :)wow its like u wrote my love life in middle skool, LoVeIt!(:

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