I fear

"for their sweet light may burn". I like the play on words here, and I like the image this gave. Interesting!

I also love the part about anchor in the waters. I think the imagery here works really well!

Commenting from my phone, sorry it's not so in depth, but I adored this poem and wanted to say a little something :)

I agree with everyting Abed said. The emotions in this poem are really intense starting with the first stanza:

I fear the candles you
adorn my bed with,
for their sweet light may
burn...

^ These few verses definately set a vivid image, which yet still leave some space for interpretation and imagination. Though the situation you described may seem nice it gets "ruined" by the fact that the speaker fears it.

though still I fear not
your anchor in my waters
nor the immense
delight you plant
on my curves

^ I thought your choice of words was great and that the metaphor you used was a nice way of saying what you two wanted to say without saying it straight away. But maybe it's just me. :P

but...
my heart becoming
too invovled in
the situation.

^ This was my favorite part and it gave your poem the final kick. I have to admit that there is nothing I complain about because it's a great piece overall.

I like ur collabs. Nice one 5/5 :)

Beautifully written. Really nice and smooth. It has a gentle feeling about it. I enjoy your use of words and how easily it just all fell into place. Lovely write :)

Danika.

As said on Noura's submission, two amazing writers created perfection and I loved it immensely.

your friend, Tara-Kay