A nice senryu Connie, very well done.

your friend, Tara-Kay.
xxx

I really love Senryus, tho I suck at writing them lol :) , I love it so much, and I love how you used your imagination in such small form,
a person who appreciates friendship, is someone who should be well trusted

5/5

I know that this challenge was a bit difficult since it is all about forms but you ROCKED!

I agree with my Nana that this was really well-written:)
and i agree and assure that you are really trustworthy! love you

Amazin xxx

I loved how you said, "on a horse of trust". Although the relationship with the one you trust can run smoothly, it can also get quite a bit bumpy, and become questioned. Overall beautiful work, beautiful message.
Take care

Exquisitely Penned, Bravo!!!

This is really excellent, the wording is just right for a short, Japanese format like this!

well done, girl:)

5/5 Ingrid

Short and sweet!! I love this poem. I've read it like 10 times and it means 10 diferent things.