Misleading world

Life was good, way back then as kids.. Older we grow, nearer the grave.. There's no time for merry at war.. I guess, this remains the ultimate truth within here.. Good job..

Spirit within lay astray
Endeavoring to perceive the light
>in this part you describing yourself that you were lead in a wrong and dark way so that you are trying to turn into path and hoping you can see the light to give light into your life...wow...i like the way you write it..amazing!

Hovering after the voices of deception
A bliss,it seemed,at the time
Realizing then the inevitable truth
of the fallacious world and it's nefarious rules
and then it seek for itself the path
leading away from this land
Towards the divine.
>Wow..your poem is really great! In free verse of poem and i like it..the way you describe the path..it is emotional and expressive about life...i love the way you ended your piece,too..deep but meaningful...excellent!5/5