No way out

by Gloria   Jul 13, 2011


My life seems torn apart
And it feels i just can't break myself out
Through that dark
Which surrounds me every second
It suffocates me
Leaves me breathless
It's too much to take
But i do
'Cause i know,
You love to see me shattered.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Very good work. I would suggest you don't capitalize all the letters since some are continuing lines, it kinda messes with the flow of the poem. The message was very good but be strong, you will pull through it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Nothing comes true, outside 'believe'.. Take your time through every option.. Before you proceed, weigh the end.. End of a matter, spells victory.. Well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nice one=)keep write more..

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