For Rania

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Awww this is such a BEAUTIFUL and sweeeet poem!! I can see how Nana is sooo honored, and she truly deserved every kind word you've written about her!

I loved it from beginning to end... loved the way you described how you wish you could carve her name in your rib cage! And the ending was perfect... I must agree with this poem.. Nana's poetry makes me feel the same way!!

Well done :)

:) even the comments will make me smile lol

Oh god, if I ever would write a poem about nana, I can somehow imagine it like this one .. AMAZING Yakiiii. just superb ...

for you seem,
to plant flowers upon my lungs
(making it pleasant for me to breathe)
^^
Its known that plants, and flowers, bring a fresh breath of air when put in a room. Here as if you were comparing your lungs to a room that is filled with a nice fresh air, I loved the images in here :)

still I dream,
of one day holding your head between
my hands,as if it was a lucky charm..
^^
Very vivid image, had to read it more than once to absorb it.

or a snowflake,perhaps.
to press my lips upon your forehead
(to thank you)
^^
If we gather all the people in PnQ whom nana has affected in some way or another, she would get a million thank you's.

A really amazing, simple, sincere poem yakii.
Good job. 5/5