Returning time

by Jack Nightengale   Aug 25, 2011


It was not what his mind was thinking,
It was what his soul was speaking.
It was not what his mouth muttered,
It was what his heart fluttered.

He thought he could live forever,
Din't think to never say never.
Used to hide and bottle things inside,
Thought it was safe when he knew that there was no place to hide.

With every step a new quote,
With every quote, death would leave a little note.
We pass this to you so that one day others can hear,
Returning time is when it fades, as that when death starts to draw near.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow! This is amazing the introduction mysterious yet intreguing. The message is clear, consice, and very creative. Your word choice is amazing. There is a tiny bit of a flow but it is absent so much its hard to say that there was one. I think you have done a good job, though I see no reason to call it worthy of a 5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Your poem was not only dark but chilling in thoughts. Death isn't something we accept easily.
    Over all I liked the poem.
    Connie

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