Crying

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 1, 2011


My vision is blurry
and I can't see.
Why?
These tears keep coming
keep falling
I feel weak
I feel sick!
Useless
And now I'm gone
In an empty
Cold
Black room.
I wanna scream!
I hate him!
I hate him for leaving me
I'm alone
I hate him for leaving me
in silence
Leaving me helpless
Leaving me to reach out
I love him
I hate him
Why?
Please, please, please
Just please Let me be!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good, very heart felt

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany C

    You making it longer then it was the first time I read it did make it better. The new words definitely and to the poem. Nice work :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem make perfect sense. The wording was good. It had a lot of emotion in it. The length was ok. Would probably be even better if there was more to it but it is still great the way that it is.

    gave it a 5/5

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