Music (Triolet)

by Ş∂ņďħy∂   Jun 22, 2004


Music brings a glow in life,
It lit my soul with a love,
Purging the woe from its fountain.
Music brings a glow in life.
It wipes my heart's earnest pain
And turns it pure, like a dove.
Music brings a glow in life,
It lit my soul with a love.

/// I tried to write a 'Triolet'.. which is AbaAabAB format... It has 8 lines... 1,4,7 lines are same. 2 and 8 are same. 2 and 6 should rhyme. 3 and 5 should rhyme. Thanks to Peter.///

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great job,Trincy.... The triolet is also on my list of forms I'd like to accomplish! :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    great job, agree with Peter, learn fast!! gonna have to try one of these!!! wonderful..love the premis, I love music too!!! (who doesnt I guess!??!) Mich :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    hi
    nice poem I like it a lot
    you really know how to use words right =)

    I gave you a 5

    please check out my poems
    "Misery" "LONELY GIRL" "Wonderful again" and "To me you're special" and comment and rate it would mean a lot to me

    hugs and kisses

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