Creature Of Night

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 5, 2011


Night approaches
and my senses so keen.
My eyes violet purple
but do tend to change colors,
I gleam like a jewel
in the silver beams
of moonlit moonlight.
My strength returns
and my eye sight,
clearer then the waters blue.
In the night I live
more powerful then a human being,
with daylight
I'm weakened
but in darkness
I can move being unseen.
I long for my soulmate
searching the impossible.
You see
I'm a creature of the night
Immortal
stuck in-between
not meant to be
but if you look closer
there's more of me to see.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is wonderful. your flow is great, your choice of words adds strength to the piece. You penned pure story captivated by all the emotion. Description tends to be a weakness for a lot of people, but not for you. Terrific piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    Like a novel.. theres a crave for more. i love it and it reminds me of my favorite author!

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow... Love this<3.
    It captures your attention wanting to read more and not want it to end. I love how u described the eyes and the scenery! you can picture it so vividly :)
    Once again, another amazing poem from you :)
    5/5